Wednesday, February 06, 2008

When was the last time you danced in the rain?

When was the last time you smiled even in pain?
When was the last time you danced in the rain?

When was the last time looked at the sky?
And feeling that it's too blue and is about to cry.
And seeing that it's too red or too bright,
And so feeling very comfortable or feeling very light.

When was the last time you saw a rising sun?
And filling youself with energy and ready for the fun.
And watching the sun going down,
And feeling a peace all around.

When was the last time you stared at the sea?
Where thousand things at the same time you can feel.
Feeling that its ruthless and peaceful at the same time,
And in that mystic place, every line of your poem rhymes.

When was the last time you treated soil as holy?
Holding it tightly in hands and then letting of go slowly-slowly,
And playing in the mud while forgetting about your elegance,
And sprinkling water on dry soil and feeling its fragrance.

When was the last time you enjoyed the chirping of the birds in early morning?
Living for yourself and not trying to make it a story.
And sitting in the soil just beneath the tree,
And feeling that you can fly and you are free.

When was the last time you gave your life a pause?
Doing something without any reason or cause.
Eating something without worrying about health or getting fat,
And doing things just like that.

When was the last time you enjoyed waiting?
And dancing as if no one is watching.
And laughing out loud even when stomach is paining,
And not thinking whether you are losing or gaining.

When was the last time you walked bare footed on the roads?
Playing cricket with friends till 8 O Clock.
Lying down on the streets gazing million stars in the sky,
Appreciating the universe and wondering when, how and why.

When was the last time you gave smile to a stranger or your neighbor?
And smiling from heart and not doing any favor.
And not feeling lonely even when you are alone,
And feeling that this whole world is your home.

When was the last time you smiled in pain?
When was the last time you danced in the rain?



-Jasdeep Mandia

11 Comments:

Blogger Akash said...

mast poem hai yaar...too good...I never knew u write so well :)

2:24 PM  
Blogger Unknown said...

Hi
Hope you remember me( Baghla's friend )

this one is surely the best of all !!

8:37 PM  
Blogger Kafir said...

The last time I danced in the rain was in 'east'. n u were there finally !!!!!!!!! ;-)
but i loved this piece more than the dance......

read yr blog for the first time today although i had excerpts from yr mobile.... i enjoyed it completely. yr work is very random.. arbit... individualistic.... natural... touching... lovely.



bahut tarif kar ditti oye. ab aur jhooth nai bola jata ;-)

8:00 PM  
Blogger Tarun Soni said...

I am not sure what you wish to convey...
but most of the things you have mentioned, either I have never done them at all..
or have done them very recently...

1:39 PM  
Blogger jasdeep mandia said...

i was talking about freeing yourself and enjoying by doing simple things which i feel we are ignoring. moving away from complexity, not thinking much and enjoying the simple things. they surely give pleasure.
love yourself, love nature!
cheers!

2:07 PM  
Blogger Tarun Soni said...

I dont know why u consider doing these things you enjoy.. i dont enjoy dancing in the rain, i catch cold [:P]..

On a serious note, When I read the title first I got that feeling... You wanted to say, people should enjoy smaller things in life and not ignore them for bigger, complex things. I dont get that message from the poem though..
The title does make you feel that way for once, but reading the lengthy poem, I kinda lost sight of the simple things you were mentioning...

2:25 PM  
Blogger jasdeep mandia said...

ok, i can see what u want to say.
in short: chill maar saale!

2:29 PM  
Blogger DC said...

this one really nice..
I doubt if u wrote it urself [:P]

10:18 PM  
Blogger sudhanshu said...

very nice poem...the msg i see that we can be richest person in the world if our happiness is cheapest, if we find goodness or happiness in every small or big thing in the life isn't it?

4:32 PM  
Blogger neo said...

Unarguably the best poem in this blog!!

Perfect..but title cud have been smth else cause u depicted every simple sight/feeling which humans tend to ignore..

Reminds me of a saying that "If we travel too fast in our life we will not only miss the beauty of the world but also we will lose the purpose of our journey.."

Keep writing

5:17 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I think u hav nt written this poem ...... fr sure ...... mere se jyada tumhe koi nahi jaan sakta hai , I bet its nt u whu wrote this ..... sorry , but its true Mr.Blogger

8:47 AM  

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