Walking all alone
There is nothing to do, nothing to say;
I am walking on my way.
There is nothing to hide, nothing to show;
I am walking all alone.
There was a time, in some place;
I was running, my life was a race.
The finishing point of one race;
Was the starting point of another race.
I left everything, left the race;
Life is still moving, but without any pace.
It was my passion or my protection;
Somehow I was moving towards perfection.
I earned gold, earned recognition;
And they were my source of satisfaction.
But with my true self I had no interaction,
So, left everything for the independence.
Strangely, the same people don’t matter anymore.
Nothing to love, nothing to hate;
Gave my life in the hands of fate.
No target, no aim, no shame, no glory;
Ahh! That’s me! That’s me!
Wind is touching my face;
I walk from place to place.
Sometimes I skip dinner, sometimes lunch;
I love this so much.
No place to go, nowhere to reach;
I am just walking and have nothing to preach.
There is nothing to do, nothing to say;
I am walking on my way.
There is nothing to hide, nothing to show;
I am walking all alone.
PS:- Dedicated to a friend of mine.
_jasdeep Mandia
10 Comments:
A very well written piece... I wish I could walk alone, but I am lot materialistic right now...
It kind of looks like your state of mind... :) but I know you are being pulled back to this materialistic world by some people :)
don't know.
big question still left: whts materialistic and whts not?
anyway, what matters is doing what you want. materialist and non-materialism is not the question.
Excellent poem!...gud thoughts gone into it...feels a really emotional and touching piece...
just a small comment on ur comment above: if what matters is what we want to do ... how abt this; a criminal wants to commit a crime, a suicide bomber wants to kill innocent people etc etc.. !
wow jassi "The Inner circle" has given u the best topic u can always debate
jassi.............
awesome yaar.........
god bless u........
tc........:) keep smiling my frnd
who is it dedicated too?
to hell with who is reading n who is not, u got to speak yr heart aloud. Its a party called life n u r in !!!!!!!!!
I love any poem which can best depict loneliness..but unfortunately very few can actually do it :)
while this one was very gud in meaning, i felt some rhyming was unnecessary which was disturbing my reading rhythm...
anyways that was literary part..
Abt the meaning in itself..wat more can i say dude..reminded me of "Boulevard of Broken Dreams" :)
Neo
I love any poem which can best depict loneliness..but unfortunately very few can actually do it :)
while this one was very gud in meaning, i felt some rhyming was unnecessary which was disturbing my reading rhythm...
anyways that was literary part..
Abt the meaning in itself..wat more can i say dude..reminded me of "Boulevard of Broken Dreams" :)
Neo
thx naresh for the comments.
this poem is more of solitude and less of loneliness.
i was looking for solitude when i wrote this.
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