Poem: An awful way to spend your life
An awful way of spend your life
Monday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
Tuesday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
Wednesday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
Thursday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
Friday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
Saturday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
Sunday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
Believing in any of the above lines, is an awful way to live your life.
-Jasdeep Mandia
Monday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
Tuesday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
Wednesday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
Thursday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
Friday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
Saturday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
Sunday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
Believing in any of the above lines, is an awful way to live your life.
-Jasdeep Mandia
posted by jasdeep mandia at 12:43 PM
11 Comments:
the most awful way 2 live is... 2 survive..and it fully depends on us how v tk d challenge of surviving......
gud job buddy........ u hv gvn a complicated clear idea 2 life...
well done!!!
Most awful form of poetry I ve ever seen:D ...just kidding....pretty good composition..and creative too.
Sardonic repetitions but a nice anticlimax..typical of jassi..
good idea behind the poem...
but I doubt if anyone thinks that way...
if anyone does he would want to commit suicide... and that is what you seem to suggest too....
To this I really want to say what Itachi said to Sasuke...
"Foolish brother... if you want to kill me.. then hate, spite, and survive pathetically, run, and run... and cling desperately to life."
The poem was awful ,
O sorry sorry I meant awesome.
thx everybody,
@tarun:- this poem is not that aggressive. i am not talking abt strong negative feelings one has towards life. i am just talking abt light negative feelings one has. so, i am just asking to avoid it.
cheers!
Oh I am bad at this.. I meant to put a smiley after the suicide comment...
*"if anyone does he would want to commit suicide... and that is what you seem to suggest too.... :P "
this is what jassi is known for...... keep it up !!!
:)
i am sure everybody would agree with me that you need to spare Sunday at least from your awful theory .
do u ever have the awful experience in life .ask from a only single educated unemployed person on whom the whole family expectations depends.or a child who have dreams but indulge in childlabure to earn for family.a child who wants to play outside but have no time due to parents expectations.or a girl who wants to fly but villager parents expect her to take care of her siblings.do visit the indian villages to know the real awful life......
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