Sunday, September 30, 2007

Poem: Want time to go back

I don’t know what to do, don’t know what to say.
Wishing that I am not too late.
Want time to go back so that I can mend.
And somehow change the past and the present.


Want to change this moment,
Want to convey what I really meant.
Somehow want to choose other option,
Somehow want to take an appropriate action


Want to see myself in some other situation,
Moving in some other direction.
Want to change my every action and every word,
Just want to see my world, your world and our world.


Want to repair, want to mend,
This time I “ll surely give my 100 percent.
Now I am enlightened, now I can see things,
Ohh TIME! Lets start again from the beginning.


I don’t know what to do, don’t know what to say.
I know that I am too late.
Want time to go back so that I can mend.
And somehow change the past and the present.


-JAsdeep MAndia


2 Comments:

Blogger Tarun Soni said...

This ones too good to but I am angry about it and you know the reason :P

12:10 AM  
Blogger Kalyan said...

I feel myself unable to review it objectively. Dude, you are too matter-of-factly in this piece. I am relating certain characters to it and what is distracting me is not the manifestation of the idea but the idea itself. So cant review it Jassi-san.

6:12 PM  

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