Monday, December 29, 2008

कविता: रामायण

कौन गुणी और कौन अवगुणी ?

कौन गलत और कौन सही?

उल्टी हो जाती राम की कहानी,

सुनते अगर रावन की ज़ुबानी।


दीये जलते तब भी ऐसे ही ,

और होती ऐसी ही आतिशबाजी।

हर घर में पूजा होती रावन की,

हल गली में जलते श्री राम जी।



- जसदीप

8 Comments:

Blogger Tarun Soni said...

A well written poem Jassi.
Talking about perspective in an elegant manner. Good one...

3:02 PM  
Blogger Kafir said...

The question is not 'Who is right?' It's 'Who wins?'
"Black or White" is decided by the one who holds the brush...

6:35 PM  
Blogger Tarun Soni said...

At first thought one would think winner is always right. But on deeper thinking that may not be necessary.
Actually there is an excellent anime on these lines "Rorouni Kenshin" in which everyone fights for their own ideals and one wins the other loses but it doesn't mean the winners ideals were right and the losers ideals were wrong.

But in this poem though it still suits to say "who is right? or who wins?" because both mean the same (right always wins) in the world of Hindu mythology.

9:26 PM  
Blogger jasdeep mandia said...

rightly said.
"achchhai kee burai par jeet" - i am just thinking how important it is for defining our lives? how much important it is to have our faith in goodness? how many of us will continue follow the right path even if we know that we won't win? how many of us will continue to believe in God even if he is not the strongest? how many parents have the courage, first to accept and then to tell to their children that they should do good even though the Final result might not be fruitful?
Though sometimes i think that the world in which people have the courage to accept facts may not be feasible because since childhood we all are taught to take support because we think we need it, we are taught is such a way that we become so much dependent on the end fruits.
I would like to live in a world where people do good/right things without thinking about fruits during or after the life?
Are we humans are capable to do so? We think "goodness will win" - is it because of our nature or because of the nurture?

12:14 PM  
Blogger DC said...

Good And Bad are purely perspective terms.
"For good to appreciate, we must n must have a bad".
But according to Indian Mythology, respecting Ravan is like you are going to fight Qasab's Case.
Well its nicely and ironically well written and truly reflect how people in this world are made to realize what is good and bad for them.
But truly speaking it needs a heart out to see it from Ravan's perspective.
-DC-

8:25 PM  
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9:00 PM  
Anonymous sudhanshu said...

history usi ki hoti hai jo jeet ta hai same is wid the case of hitler agar vo jeet jaata to fir kahani kuch or hi hoti.. so this is a gr8 question ki kya hota agar ravan jeet jaata...

1:14 PM  
Blogger Abhilasha said...

awsome man .. hats off to u :)

8:27 PM  

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