Poem: So am I
Between the tall towers
There is a patch of grass
where I sit,
lie down and relax.
The shape of the lawn defines
The shape of the sky-
small, incomplete, less-free;
So am I.
And because of the lights of the tower
The light of the stars appear-
lost and less bright;
So am I .
-Jas Mandia
There is a patch of grass
where I sit,
lie down and relax.
The shape of the lawn defines
The shape of the sky-
small, incomplete, less-free;
So am I.
And because of the lights of the tower
The light of the stars appear-
lost and less bright;
So am I .
-Jas Mandia
posted by jasdeep mandia at 2:26 AM
6 Comments:
Awesome!!
lovely :)
Good one... but there is an obvious way out... get out from between the tall towers
My take :D -
Outside the tall towers,
there is the vast green of the jungle,
where you stand,
stand up and dance in joy.
The boundless vast of the jungle,
The unlimited sky-
big, absolute, free;
So is life.
In the darkness of the trees
The light of the stars appear-
happy and twinkling bright;
So is life.
- Chulla 2yrs back :P
Job wob chodke chalte hain road trip par...
awesome haddu.
thts great, tere ander ka poet jaag gaya hai.
now, start writing.
sahi kaha, 2 saal pehle ka chulla was rightly described by u.
i am making plans for a trip.
tu aa india, fir chalengey kahin pe.
cheers!
good one Lui XVII
nice poetry jasdeep.keep it up.but review for pyaar impossible was like movie only little stretched out.but keep writing keep rocking.
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